| felixconnie ( @ 2008-02-04 02:46:00 |
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paragraph three
Note: I've come up with a possible name for my novel, and even tho you may not understand it, i would like to hear feedback on it.
the name is 'Flash Happy'.
paragraph 1-3 start:
The conversation in that black camero was different than the usual girl trouble and missed assignments, it went as such. they were talking about a level in the latest Mario game, when all of a sudden Mark's face became serious and he said, " hey Vinny, what's up? your usually on your 5th fat joke by now, you okay?" To which Vincent responded, "Huh? oh, yeah Im good, just thinking about someone..." "Oh really now? anyone that i would know?" " I think you would they're in our 4th hour class." Mark looked at him with dismay, " Our floral arrangement class? the only reason we took that class was to get an easy A and meet girls, so how do you expect me to pick the one girl from the class of 34?" "How about a hint, something that will most likely give it away completely?" " well, I'm not one to use cheat codes, but I'll make an exception this time. so what is it? does she have brown hair? big tits? I know, it's the girl with the huge eyes, right?!" " not the..." "wait, it isn't the teacher is it, i know you like the old fat women, but come on, man she's ugly. " Mark I'm trying to..." " wait, wait. it has to be the small bookish chick with the perfect tits, long red hair, and the hot kind of glasses. thats got to be..." " Mark, it's Gene! Y'know, Eugene Bryant?! he's the one i can't stop thinking about!" there was a silence in the car that felt as if it would create a black hole and consume the cosmos.
paragraph 1-3 end.
ok, i hope that you enjoyed it, of course i want you to comment and tell me what you think! BTW this is the last completely clean paragraph for.... well... a good part of the book... so... yeah... warning to young people.